Writing

There once was a duck could martin,a key could Susin and a jandel.  They were all best friends. One day Martin Susin and jandel went for a walk and they saw …. a  pig a dead sheep three doves and two cats. Then they went home and got food ready for their picnic, they had meat and pizza “that was yum” said Martin.why they were chatting they heard thump thump thump Martin slowly walked inside and saw a big big big dinosaur. He just froze in frightness. Key and jandel stepped in and fainted the dinosaur fainted to because he was so scared. Then they became best friends.

Walt: Put the pictures into our story and right about them 

Next steps: to right a better story.