Writing

WALT:write a narrative introduction by describing the setting.

Next steps do more of a narrative 

This is my story.

On Sunday I went fishing with my brother and dad.I casted my line in I waited for about two minutes. Then something started pulling my line. Then suddenly it pulled me in.it pulled me under and under!!!!!!!! Luckily I had a life jacket on and I floated. I was still worried I didn't know what it was.then it jumped.dad was worried he said “are you okay Sian?”I said “yes”then I realised it was a King fish.it was yellow and red.it was adout as big as a whale.dad lifted me up and we had caught it and brought it to our cottage in the mountains and had it for dinner….and we did have a big dinner.

TAKE#2

We stood aboard the goldin queen.

The sun was shining happily.

The black clouds were stored with rain.

Rhys was on top of the cabin.

The blue fish leaped into the sky.

Dad was standing next to me.

The King fish was tugging my rod.

The sea was calm.

The sky was blue.

Dad and Rhys’s bait was still hanging lonely.

The steering wheel was still and cold.